<!DOCTYPE HTML PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD HTML 4.01 Transitional//EN"> <html><head><title>notebook</title> <meta http-equiv="Content-Type" content="text/html; charset=ISO-8859-1"> <style type="text/css"> body { background: url(notebook.gif); font-family: arial; font-size:12px; padding-left:36px; padding-top:7px; } </style> </head> <body> <div style="text-align: center;"><big style="color: rgb(102, 102, 102);">SCREENPLAY CONSULTANCY</big> </div> <div style="margin-left: 0px; width: 934px;"><big><br> </big> <div style="text-align: left; margin-left: 0px; width: 920px;"><big><span style="color: rgb(102, 102, 102);"><small>GENERAL CONSULTANCY</small></span></big><br> <big><span style="color: rgb(102, 102, 102);"><small>A professional assessment of your feature film<br> script pointing out the areas that need </small></span></big><big><span style="color: rgb(102, 102, 102);"><small><br> improvement, providing you with general guide-<br> lines to move to the next draft covering Premise, </small></span></big><big><span style="color: rgb(102, 102, 102);"><small><br> Characterisation, Dialogue, Plot, Writing Style, <br> Marketability &amp; Audience, and Formatting, with <br> </small></span></big><big><span style="color: rgb(102, 102, 102);"><small>recommendations. </small></span></big><br> <big><span style="color: rgb(102, 102, 102);"><big><small><small>250</small> </small></big></span></big><br> <big><span style="color: rgb(102, 102, 102);"></span></big><br> <big><span style="color: rgb(102, 102, 102);"><big><small><small>SYNOPSIS &amp; TREATMENT ANALYSIS </small></small></big></span></big><br> <big><span style="color: rgb(102, 102, 102);"><big><small><small>Analysis of your outline, tighten plot, eliminate <br> potential pitfalls prior to developing the treatment </small></small></big></span></big><big><span style="color: rgb(102, 102, 102);"><big><small><small><br> or screenplay. </small></small></big></span></big><br> <big><span style="color: rgb(102, 102, 102);"><big><small><small>100</small></small> </big></span></big><br> <big><span style="color: rgb(102, 102, 102);"></span></big><br> <big><span style="color: rgb(102, 102, 102);"><big><small><small>DETAILED DEVELOPMENT NOTES </small></small></big></span></big><br> <big><span style="color: rgb(102, 102, 102);"><big><small><small>Analysis offering practical suggestions to take <br> your screenplay to the next level featuring scene-<br> </small></small></big></span></big><big><span style="color: rgb(102, 102, 102);"><big><small><small>by-scene analysis, editing, looking at problem <br> areas and possible solutions for plot and </small></small></big></span></big><big><span style="color: rgb(102, 102, 102);"><big><small><small><br> structure tightening, examining genre issues, <br> character arcs and dialogue strengthening. </small></small></big></span></big><br> <big><span style="color: rgb(102, 102, 102);"><big><small><small><small><big>400</big> </small></small></small></big></span></big><br> <big><span style="color: rgb(102, 102, 102);"></span></big><br> <big><span style="color: rgb(102, 102, 102);"><big><small><small>FEATURE FILM SCRIPT CONSULTANCY </small></small></big></span></big><br> <big><span style="color: rgb(102, 102, 102);"><big><small><small>Fine editing and proofing screenplay, fixing <br> issues of Story,Genre, Theme, Character, <br> Dialogue </small></small></big></span></big><big><span style="color: rgb(102, 102, 102);"><big><small><small>Plot,Structure, Pace, Style, Tone, <br> Format,Grammar, Marketability</small></small></big></span></big><br> <big><span style="color: rgb(102, 102, 102);"><big><small><small>600</small></small> </big></span></big><br> <big><span style="color: rgb(102, 102, 102);"><big>&nbsp;</big></span></big><br> <big><span style="color: rgb(102, 102, 102);"><big><small><small>SCRIPT POLISHING</small> </small></big></span></big><br> <big><span style="color: rgb(102, 102, 102);"><big><small><small>First Draft - detailed development notes </small></small></big></span></big><br> <big><span style="color: rgb(102, 102, 102);"><big><small><small>Second Draft - detailed development notes </small></small></big></span></big><br> <big><span style="color: rgb(102, 102, 102);"><big><small><small>Third Draft - detailed development notes <br> with practical advice for the&nbsp;next step. </small></small></big></span></big><br> <big><span style="color: rgb(102, 102, 102);"><big><small><small>750</small> </small></big></span></big><br> <big><span style="color: rgb(102, 102, 102);"></span></big><br> <big><span style="color: rgb(102, 102, 102);"><big><small><small style="font-style: italic;">SHORT FILM <small>(under 40 pages) </small></small></small></big></span></big><br> <big><span style="color: rgb(102, 102, 102);"><big><small><small>Detailed analysis of film script, offering <br> professional assessment and practical <br> solutions - </small></small></big></span></big><big><span style="color: rgb(102, 102, 102);"><big><small><small>Report 125 </small></small></big></span></big><br> <big><span style="color: rgb(102, 102, 102);"><big><small><small>Detailed analysis of premise, structure, <br> character and commercial feasibility - </small></small></big></span></big><big><span style="color: rgb(102, 102, 102);"><big><small><small><br> Development Report 150 </small></small></big></span></big><br> <big><span style="color: rgb(102, 102, 102);"><big><small><small>Detailed analysis, development and input <br> on script and commercial feasibility - </small></small></big></span></big><big><span style="color: rgb(102, 102, 102);"><big><small><small><br> Development Input 200</small> </small> </big></span></big><br> <big><span style="color: rgb(102, 102, 102);"></span></big><br> <big><span style="color: rgb(102, 102, 102);"></span></big><br> <big><span style="color: rgb(102, 102, 102);"><big><small><small style="color: silver;"><small>TERMS.Standard turnaround is three weeks. <br> Additional charge for fast turnaround on request. <br> Scripts over 125 </small></small></small></big></span></big><big><span style="color: rgb(102, 102, 102);"><big><small><small style="color: silver;"><small>pages incur an additional charge <br> of 1 per page. 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